Score: 10

"Refreshing"

submission: Dance Off!

date: November 6, 2009

A nice, funny, original short timed well with music.
It was really entertaining and nice to see.

The animation was decent too, which was a plus.

Definitely wanting more from you!

Score: 1

"Horrendous Scripting paired with Terrible Voices."

submission: DeDeDes Minions Nightmare

date: November 3, 2009

First thing is first, please check the volume on ALL of your audio tracks to check if they are loud enough. Most of the time all the voices were drowned out by the music, making them pretty much impossible to hear.

Anyways, to the bulk of my review.

First off, stolen graphics tweened haphazardly across the screen. The least you can do with sprites are to take some time and ease some of the tweens to make them look nicer, but that seemed to be a bit much work as well. Now you said to vote fairly because it was sprites, not that I normally decide to unfairly vote on any submission compared to another. Regardless, sprites are stolen artwork and that is that. There is no denying that. Unless you want to somehow prove that you drew every single one of the things presented on screen, then please PM me with your artwork and I'll see for myself if you actually drew it.

The voice acting just sounded like some kid with a mic saying shit, making the movie really bland. It was annoying to try and follow because the volume of the voices were so low compared to the music that when I even heard a voice well, it didn't hold my attention.

The timing of your jokes was really awkward and not that funny. In fact, most of the jokes weren't funny to begin with. All the humor was random cock jokes and homosexual humor executed poorly. I couldn't really find any memorable moments in this flash that would make me go, "i'd watch this again" or, "i'd show this to others." The punchline was really weak, which also made this flash forgetful.

The lip syncing was literally just a circle of a mouth getting bigger and smaller. I would like to say that the Lip Sync was tied well to the voices which was a positive point for this piece. Try actually using different types of mouths. For example, does your mouth in real life actually turn from a small circle to a big one? Do you show your tongue or teeth in the word/syllable you are speaking?

Suggestions?

Try and draw your characters in your flash. I'd rather see some bad art than see you give up and default to sprites.

Practice Practice Practice.
Work on scripting.
Work on voices.
Work on drawing.

If you keep practicing, you'll get better. :)

I hope this review is helpful for ya.

Score: 10

"Beautifully Executed."

submission: -hipsterween-

date: November 2, 2009

This was quite spectacular.

Your art is very stylish. Your drawings are what kept me wanting more.
You had a nice feel throughout the video and mixed it well with the music.

My only down side to this is the fact that you played to the camera alot with transitions and zooms instead of having more actual animation.
Sure its nice to have every once in awhile to set a mood or an effect, but I felt it was used in excess.
Some of the bounce up and down tweens were a little awkward, but didn't really detract from the piece as a whole.

This was by far one of my favorite Halloween entries this year.
I hope you win something. :)

Score: 10

"Kyaztro Comeback!"

submission: Skeleton and Ghostman

date: November 2, 2009

I thought youd disappeared!
But you've made quite the comeback!

Seriously, this flash was animated beautifully.
The Tombstone rotation was just fabulous and all the animation of the ghost was great.

I hope that you'll start making more again!

Score: 10

"Too Original"

submission: Bloody Sundae

date: October 31, 2009

I likd ur movi cept Y ddnt she get raped?? i mean gez ppls lifes gettin ruind is hella arousing XDDDD

Anyweyz, teh zombee shuld hve ben mario and the grl shoulda ben princess peach it woulda made it teh lulzy!!

less originality nd moar sprites pl0x.

Score: 8

"Lmao"

submission: TheGuyWithABrainInAJar

date: October 31, 2009

Although the art and animation was a bit rough for my liking, the VA and general idea just made me laugh.

I think if you spent just a tad bit more time and cleaned up your coloring and a bit of your line work, this would have been even better and more enjoyable.

Keep on truckin Scribs!

Score: 10

"Whoa..."

submission: Super Mario Bros. Z ep f

date: October 30, 2009

...Not only was that bad ya think ya get some real screams for this spam. I belive this is why mute buttons were made. I wish i knew why ya did this but i dont't. Please don't spam on the Super Mario Bros. Z Flashes there truly remarkable worthy enough for a tank award but that's just my opinion. I'm sorry but i can't give you any stars for this and who knows if this stays around you may get Turd of the week you'll have your own award just not one ya wanna touch haha ^-^; i bid you good day or night depends on your time zone

Score: 8

"I kinda agree with Chicken"

submission: Ghoofhal

date: October 30, 2009

Although, I wouldn't ditch the coloring, try do to something different than the usual you know?

Like alot of your work feels the same, but i think if you mess around and try to do something different, itll come out even better.

Regardless, I still enjoyed this, but branch out a bit.

Score: 7

"You've improved alot!"

submission: Fear the Night

date: October 30, 2009

I had a feeling you'd get better and after watching your stuff, you really have. :)

Your animation has improved alot, but still needs some work. Try making your drawing a little more consistent with each drawing cause some of it felt a little jerky. If you have trouble using singles, do the action in doubles cause it'll still look good.

Your color choice was average on your character. It was kinda an eyesore to watch. The gradient BGs also didn't help, but I liked the tubing and stuff you added in the Castle/Lab.

On thing about that walk you used over and over again is that it needs some bounce in each step to make it more natural. Like the leg and arm movements were fine but to give your character a sense of fluidity and weight, you gotta add that bounce. The crawl you made was also really nicely done, so props on that.

Music choice was gave it a great feel and i really couldn't think of a better song to pick.

Keep on practicing and you'll get even better. ;)

Mexifry

Score: 5

"A very average collab"

submission: Castle Crashers Collab

date: October 26, 2009

None of the parts in this collab "wowed" me.
It was all very average animations with average art to be expected on an NG Collab.

None of them were really that funny at all. Tbh the only part I somewhat enjoyed was Dante224. Overall his part was best animated and scripted.

This really shouldn't be on the frontpage.
Try harder next time.