Score: 10

"Another great short."

submission: Schmooper-Schmeroes

date: November 10, 2009

The Boogley animates something.
It looks good as usual.

Enough said.

Score: 6

"This just gave me the heebee geebees."

submission: Sweet Dreams, Timmy.

date: November 10, 2009

If you even know what that even means. haha
I got chills i was weirded/creeped out by it.
Well, I guess you did your job.

Just like TheBoogley said, I'm gonna have to live with that for the rest of my life. D:

Score: 10

"My God..."

submission: You Cried Me

date: November 8, 2009

This was beautiful.
One of the Best flashes this year.
The execution.
The Coloring.
The Music.

Everything was so great.

This is art man and not alot of true art hits NG.

Great job bro.

Score: 10

"My food is chewed"

submission: Chew your food.

date: November 8, 2009

yup

Score: 10

"Refreshing"

submission: Dance Off!

date: November 6, 2009

A nice, funny, original short timed well with music.
It was really entertaining and nice to see.

The animation was decent too, which was a plus.

Definitely wanting more from you!

Score: 1

"Horrendous Scripting paired with Terrible Voices."

submission: DeDeDes Minions Nightmare

date: November 3, 2009

First thing is first, please check the volume on ALL of your audio tracks to check if they are loud enough. Most of the time all the voices were drowned out by the music, making them pretty much impossible to hear.

Anyways, to the bulk of my review.

First off, stolen graphics tweened haphazardly across the screen. The least you can do with sprites are to take some time and ease some of the tweens to make them look nicer, but that seemed to be a bit much work as well. Now you said to vote fairly because it was sprites, not that I normally decide to unfairly vote on any submission compared to another. Regardless, sprites are stolen artwork and that is that. There is no denying that. Unless you want to somehow prove that you drew every single one of the things presented on screen, then please PM me with your artwork and I'll see for myself if you actually drew it.

The voice acting just sounded like some kid with a mic saying shit, making the movie really bland. It was annoying to try and follow because the volume of the voices were so low compared to the music that when I even heard a voice well, it didn't hold my attention.

The timing of your jokes was really awkward and not that funny. In fact, most of the jokes weren't funny to begin with. All the humor was random cock jokes and homosexual humor executed poorly. I couldn't really find any memorable moments in this flash that would make me go, "i'd watch this again" or, "i'd show this to others." The punchline was really weak, which also made this flash forgetful.

The lip syncing was literally just a circle of a mouth getting bigger and smaller. I would like to say that the Lip Sync was tied well to the voices which was a positive point for this piece. Try actually using different types of mouths. For example, does your mouth in real life actually turn from a small circle to a big one? Do you show your tongue or teeth in the word/syllable you are speaking?

Suggestions?

Try and draw your characters in your flash. I'd rather see some bad art than see you give up and default to sprites.

Practice Practice Practice.
Work on scripting.
Work on voices.
Work on drawing.

If you keep practicing, you'll get better. :)

I hope this review is helpful for ya.

Score: 10

"Beautifully Executed."

submission: -hipsterween-

date: November 2, 2009

This was quite spectacular.

Your art is very stylish. Your drawings are what kept me wanting more.
You had a nice feel throughout the video and mixed it well with the music.

My only down side to this is the fact that you played to the camera alot with transitions and zooms instead of having more actual animation.
Sure its nice to have every once in awhile to set a mood or an effect, but I felt it was used in excess.
Some of the bounce up and down tweens were a little awkward, but didn't really detract from the piece as a whole.

This was by far one of my favorite Halloween entries this year.
I hope you win something. :)

Score: 10

"Kyaztro Comeback!"

submission: Skeleton and Ghostman

date: November 2, 2009

I thought youd disappeared!
But you've made quite the comeback!

Seriously, this flash was animated beautifully.
The Tombstone rotation was just fabulous and all the animation of the ghost was great.

I hope that you'll start making more again!

Score: 10

"Too Original"

submission: Bloody Sundae

date: October 31, 2009

I likd ur movi cept Y ddnt she get raped?? i mean gez ppls lifes gettin ruind is hella arousing XDDDD

Anyweyz, teh zombee shuld hve ben mario and the grl shoulda ben princess peach it woulda made it teh lulzy!!

less originality nd moar sprites pl0x.

Score: 8

"Lmao"

submission: TheGuyWithABrainInAJar

date: October 31, 2009

Although the art and animation was a bit rough for my liking, the VA and general idea just made me laugh.

I think if you spent just a tad bit more time and cleaned up your coloring and a bit of your line work, this would have been even better and more enjoyable.

Keep on truckin Scribs!