Age/Gender: 16, Male
Location: Seattle, Wa
Job: N/A
Yeah, um I do the pixel flashes and stuff and I make that weird french fry with the mustache.
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...Not only was that bad ya think ya get some real screams for this spam. I belive this is why mute buttons were made. I wish i knew why ya did this but i dont't. Please don't spam on the Super Mario Bros. Z Flashes there truly remarkable worthy enough for a tank award but that's just my opinion. I'm sorry but i can't give you any stars for this and who knows if this stays around you may get Turd of the week you'll have your own award just not one ya wanna touch haha ^-^; i bid you good day or night depends on your time zone
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...Not only was that bad ya think ya get some real screams for this spam. I belive this is why mute buttons were made. I wish i knew why ya did this but i dont't. Please don't spam on the Super Mario Bros. Z Flashes there truly remarkable worthy enough for a tank award but that's just my opinion. I'm sorry but i can't give you any stars for this and who knows if this stays around you may get Turd of the week you'll have your own award just not one ya wanna touch haha ^-^; i bid you good day or night depends on your time zone
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Although, I wouldn't ditch the coloring, try do to something different than the usual you know?
Like alot of your work feels the same, but i think if you mess around and try to do something different, itll come out even better.
Regardless, I still enjoyed this, but branch out a bit.
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yup
thanks though
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I had a feeling you'd get better and after watching your stuff, you really have. :)
Your animation has improved alot, but still needs some work. Try making your drawing a little more consistent with each drawing cause some of it felt a little jerky. If you have trouble using singles, do the action in doubles cause it'll still look good.
Your color choice was average on your character. It was kinda an eyesore to watch. The gradient BGs also didn't help, but I liked the tubing and stuff you added in the Castle/Lab.
On thing about that walk you used over and over again is that it needs some bounce in each step to make it more natural. Like the leg and arm movements were fine but to give your character a sense of fluidity and weight, you gotta add that bounce. The crawl you made was also really nicely done, so props on that.
Music choice was gave it a great feel and i really couldn't think of a better song to pick.
Keep on practicing and you'll get even better. ;)
Mexifry
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Alot of people tell me that. Im trying to improve on that. Thanks man. I usually animate on doubles. And then draw inbetweens.
The tubing things seemed to be the best parts. Ill need to make things more stylized like that.
The walk had bounce, but not nearly enough. Thanks for the tips. Ill try that.
Thanks so much for the review!
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None of the parts in this collab "wowed" me.
It was all very average animations with average art to be expected on an NG Collab.
None of them were really that funny at all. Tbh the only part I somewhat enjoyed was Dante224. Overall his part was best animated and scripted.
This really shouldn't be on the frontpage.
Try harder next time.
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This is by far my favorite halloween submission this year so far.
It is the only one with good animation.
Keep on making them bro!
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I really enjoyed watching this from beginning to end. It wsa very visually entertaining for what it was. You seem to have alot of great animation talent, unlike alot of people on NG, so it is nice to see a fresh face for once.
Im gonna be super gay and say it was too short cause it was. The only reason why I say it is too short is cause I want more of it to watch. :)
I still favorited it cause it was done well for what it was.
9/10
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This was refreshing to see you do something that was different than your other works.
The twist you had was actually a cool unique twist. I found the 3rd grade play concept quite funny and was executed pretty well.
Some parts felt a little rushed an speed through, but it was overall pretty well done.
Yeah, the animation could use some work, but it was some good entertainment, which is why it didn't give a perfect 10.
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These were some pretty good tests, although the legs seem like they are changing perspective on the the staying alive strut.
Regardless, these were good.
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mexifro
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The graphics were superb, the game felt like one of the classics nad the music fit in smoothly as well.
It had a cute little story and although it was short, it was enjoyable while it lasted.
This should be like a 4.00+ game.
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I really enjoyed your art style.
It was really fitting to the whole overall theme and tone.
The music choice was also a nice touch.
Sorry if this review kinda sucks. lol
This was hard work paid off that's for sure. :)
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<+mrscriblam> unlike any other beedrill
<+mrscriblam> thats ever been made
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